In reading the essay, High Score Education, I think one of the strengths in the body is that the author is very persuasive and used clear and concise language. Another strength I think the author has is that he is able to relate to his audience and use examples of games that are relevant and current. He shows that he has experience using the video games also.
I think one of the weaknesses in the essay is that it does not include any evidence to support his claim that video games are a more powerful form of learning than a classroom. He does not show that he has carefully researched the issue and gathered statics that are reliable to be convincing.
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